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« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2005 02:18:45 PM »

Ditto nushy regarding critiques. The fingers are a bit too short- maybe a different position would look better too. I Maybe elongate them and have them all stretch up vertically, more like this. Creepy google pic, i know. But the look is there.


Very nice job- especially on the lips. The shading looks very professtional. The only other thing I would add is shading under her cheekbones and on the side of her face. Compared with the beautiful nose the other side looks a bit sharp and flat.

Beautiful Job overall!

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« Reply #11 on: September 29, 2005 05:58:35 AM »

The fingers are supposed to be curled in toward her face.  Maybe if they came out a little farther....

I need to do a series on hands because I'm really weak there.  Eyes, I can do all day long but fingers (shudder)



I made some changes based on feedback
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« Reply #12 on: September 29, 2005 06:24:46 AM »

I like the last one the best, and i cant see the irst one. The had is still a bit weird but the face is good and she looks more smiley than in the 2nd one. More happily dreamy and less bored.
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« Reply #13 on: September 29, 2005 07:49:04 AM »

thanks everyone.  this was really helpful
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« Reply #14 on: September 29, 2005 08:09:05 AM »

The new mouth is awesome! She does look much happier and dreamier now. I still think she looks a little crosseyed though. The twinkle in her eyes is in a different spot on each eye.
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« Reply #15 on: September 30, 2005 05:17:38 PM »

Oh, her smile is great, and her finger tips are lovely.

the back of her hand is a little dark- maybe just select that area and lighten it 50%... right now it's looking the teensyest bit 'Bride of Teen Wolf.'  Wink
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