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Topic: WIP: Mr. McFluffypants as Black Bart  (Read 1089 times)
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« on: December 13, 2011 07:57:51 PM »

I'm working on this for my 16 year old brother as a Christmas gift. I'd love to get some feedback before I finish it. Constructive criticism is welcome.

It's pen and ink wash on watercolor paper, 7"x10"

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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2011 12:39:24 AM »

Well, it makes me smile.

What were you planning to do further to it?
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« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2011 07:18:38 AM »

The work on the face is good.  His body at this point kind of disappears, if you were to deepen the shadows there it would look more complete. 
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« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2012 09:46:07 PM »

I would make his mustache more impressive, more robust with curls at the ends. The kind you think of when you hear "Railroad baron". It'll be more of a focal point and have more purpose on the canvas.
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« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2012 03:32:32 PM »

I agree about the mustache.  And I think if you do a dark background wash of some kind it will bring out the dog beautifully.  Other than that, it looks done to me.
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« Reply #5 on: February 21, 2012 08:33:15 AM »

Thanks for the feedback. I finished it and gave it to my brother for Christmas. Here's the final product: http://cinnamonteal.blogspot.com/2012/01/black-bart.html It's mostly the same as up above, but I blackened the blacks and added a little more depth to his "beard".
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