A Crafts Community For Craft Ideas & DIY Projects - Craftster.org
Help | About | Contact | Press | Advertise | Terms | Site Map
Welcome, Guest.
Please login or register.
Random Tip: Joining an Organized Swap? Please review the rules and info on a regular basis.
Total Members: 300,935
Currently Running With Scissors:
660 Guests and 13 Users
Home Craftster Community Crafting Articles Craft Tutorials My Craftster Crafting Calendar City Guides Craft Shop


Pages: [1]
Jump to page:
  Show Images Only     Send this topic  |  Print  |  Bookmark  
Topic: Scene Wreath *UPDATED*  (Read 994 times)
Tags for this thread:  Add new tag
Share the love... Pin it Submit to reddit add to Wists
1+
 
7daytrial
« on: November 24, 2010 09:28:00 PM »

My friend and I just started making fabric wreaths and I'm looking for a little feedback.
This is our first completed embellished wreath and it's targeted for an emo/scene kid.




If you like it, let me know. If you hate it, let me know what you hate. If you are indifferent then just say hi!

*UPDATE*

Thanks for the feedback, I made a few changes and want to see what you think.











« Last Edit: November 25, 2010 01:41:51 PM by 7daytrial » THIS ROCKS   Logged
wendiek
Friend of Craftster Friend of Craftster

Offline Offline

Posts: 2959
Joined: 29-Nov-2007

Creativity is a gift! Wrap it up and give it away.


View Profile WWW
« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2010 04:24:07 AM »

I think you need to remove the white shoelace (I think that's what it is).
Use black shiny ribbon instead of that and add some black lace to it.

Maybe add some more emo/scene things to it.

Oh, I think it looks nice and it would be a nice gift, I should've said that to begin with!

(Hope you understand, since English isn't my language I find it hard to describe what I mean exactly and I don't always know the right word Undecided)

UPDATE:
That's what I meant. The pink makes it more "soft", but I like it that way. If you want it to be more "rock" you'd better use the colours kirby_kurd suggested.
You're welcome, isn't this what Craftster is all about?
« Last Edit: November 26, 2010 06:26:04 AM by wendiek » THIS ROCKS   Logged
kirby_kurd
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2010 07:37:25 AM »

I like the wreath, but I think you've missed your target audience.  IMO, it's too cutesy to be considered 'scene' or 'emo' - it's something I would buy to hang in my toddler's room.

Perhaps adding more black fabric, lace, metal findings, zippers?, grommet tape, studs, etc would help.  Maybe reconsider your color scheme too - black and red/maroon, or black and purple might be more appropriate for the audience?

Just my opinion!
THIS ROCKS   Logged
7daytrial
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2010 12:32:51 PM »

Thanks, guys!  Most of the wreaths we've done have been for kids/toddlers, so I was probably still in a baby mindset Cheesy  I'll replace the shoelace ribbon asap and try to add some more embellishments (plus photograph on a different background so you can see the pendant at the bottom)

I was afraid to make it too cluttered but after looking at it again, I think it's too bare.

I'm so glad that you left such great advice!
THIS ROCKS   Logged
Threads you might like:
Pages: [1] Jump to page:
  Send this topic  |  Print  |  Bookmark  
 
Jump to:  



FacebookTwitterPinterest
only results with images
include swap threads
advanced search



your ad could be here!

How-To Videos
How To Darken Your Foundation For Summer
Topshop Felt Tip Liner Review
6 Beauty Trends Under $20
Caudalie Polyphenol C15 Collection Review
HSN Beauty Report with Amy Morrison
Latest Blog Articles
@Home This Weekend: Chalkboard Wine Glasses
Handmade Gift Ideas: Wooden Chain
Handmade Gift Ideas: Upcycled Car Trash Bag

Comparison Shopping




Support Craftster
Become a
Friend of Craftster

Buy Craftster Swag
Buy Craft Supplies
Comparison Shopping

Craftster heartily thanks the following peeps...
Moderators

Follow Craftster...






Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.11 | SMF © 2006-2009, Simple Machines LLC
SimplePortal 2.3.5 © 2008-2012, SimplePortal
Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!

Copyright ©2003-2014, Craftster.org an Internet Brands company.