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« on: July 18, 2009 05:33:52 PM »

This is a new work I completed today.  I would love some feedback on the work so that I can improve.  Thanks!



The super high resolution image can be seen here, its much better:
http://visualhierarchy.artician.com/portfolio/Leaves-in-the-Wind/
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« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2009 06:59:49 PM »

It's been a while since I drew anything (well anyway) and I really like this a lot. The only thing I could say is that it is unclear whether the stripes are outside the structures or if they are a doorway showing inside. If they are a doorway you could possibly add more shading to add a touch more depth. I don't know though, cuz I also think it looks awesome as is. I wish I could see the high res. but I have dial up so it would take forever.

I love the leaves too, makes you think where are they coming from?
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« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2009 03:42:25 PM »

I really love the delicacy of your lines
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« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2009 09:05:58 PM »

I really love the delicacy of your lines

yes! and there is some interesting contrast between the delicacy of the line and the sharpness of the landscape and the bulk of the silo-like structures.


@visualhierarchy- can i ask what is the idea behind this landscape? i'd be interested in knowing more about it.
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