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« Reply #20 on: August 24, 2008 08:38:50 AM »

ya i drew the girl. she is wearing the 'princess pigtails' from my collection Smiley
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« Reply #21 on: August 24, 2008 10:18:45 AM »

I thought the pigtails looked like yours! Maybe b/c it was so small on my screen I wasn't sure - that's why I suggested to to do well...what you did - put your product on the girl.
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« Reply #22 on: August 25, 2008 09:04:21 AM »

banner 3!

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« Reply #23 on: August 25, 2008 11:36:22 AM »

trying for the best of both worlds I see...it may almost be too much though...it might just be a proportion thing...maybe taglines smaller &/or pieces on the right smaller or tinted lighter like a background
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« Reply #24 on: August 28, 2008 08:13:35 AM »

hows this?
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« Reply #25 on: August 29, 2008 10:49:04 AM »

Very nice. The text is big and easy to read. Guess it depends on where you plan on placing the banner but maybe adding your contact information would be nice. Also, I think you should limit to 1 tag line because, otherwise, it seems a little crowded.
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« Reply #26 on: August 29, 2008 03:47:27 PM »

its for my website. carrying on from here http://www.craftster.org/forum/index.php?topic=264280.0
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« Reply #27 on: August 31, 2008 05:58:57 AM »

I was thinking more like this:



Simplify. Two tags rolled into one, and I don't think you need a photo there. You've got the girl with stuff in her hair already. It definitely gets the point across.
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« Reply #28 on: August 31, 2008 06:44:11 AM »

see...that's why Crafty does what she does...with the first banner of the girl it was too small to get the idea of the hair pieces - this way it stands out nicely...great font too.
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« Reply #29 on: August 31, 2008 08:30:20 AM »

i had done this one too



i dont really want to change the tag lines as its on my business cards, my van, etc

i guess i dont need the boutique style line. i can put that elsewhere on the site...

thank you for the continued input! off to tinker some more Smiley
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