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« on: June 01, 2007 08:35:27 PM »

Hi everyone!

I am working on (just started today), my first altered book. It's a children's book composed of several short and on-related poems. I pulled some words and phrases from some of the poems to create my own, what do you think?

Bare feet -
What a difference!
Still trying to  understand
What's it like
Through the open doors?
I don't have a clue.
When the moment comes
You'll see
Everybody has something
Just keep looking.

I like it and it makes sense to me, but does it to you? I didn't want a theme for my book really, so the words are just to help hold it together. They are a bit separated though, for instance there may be several pages of non-text between lines. Do you think that would work?

Thanks for your input.

Meghan
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« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2007 08:36:13 PM »

I like it! Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2007 08:39:28 PM »

it makes sense to me i thought its like a child growin up or sumthing
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