It's getting there. I like this one lots better, but it still seems to need a little bit something extra. Maybe even just playing around with the placement of the "batter up" part. I think it could be a smidgen higher.
Oh, I don't know the more I look at it the more it looks just fine the way it is. Sorry, to be so indecisive about my suggestions.
LOL! I appreciate your input and I think you're right. I moved the text up a bit and it's as good as it's gonna get. - I'm calling this one "done".