Duly noted. The phrasing of your critique could be less abrasive, but you have a good point. I flipped him earlier today and not only are his shoulders ridiculous but they're also lopsided. It's what I get for drawing at 3 am and thinking it'll be amazing.
I'm sorry! I had no intention of being abrasive about it. (I'm one of those people who just says whatever I think, and although I don't think I seem as harsh in person, I have been told I'm about as smooth as 40 grit sandpaper, so I guess I should probably work on that!) Honestly, though, I don't think there's anything wrong with your artistry at all- I just felt like he looked older than you said he was..
Also, I love the new hair!