Hello all!
So I made this little doozy (potentially) for my art portfolio, but for whatever reason Im just not
sure about it! Im not sure if the light takes to much away from the detail of the moth orrr whaaat! Let me know what you think of the composition and if you think it should just be a stand alone piece!

and the moth alone!

I donno! Maybe its too much contrast?? Maybe im over thinking things! Any type of feedback would be greatly appreciated!
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A bit of toying around with some velum,wire and contact paper and i came up with this, not sure if i love it but I think im getting closer. The contact paper i colored yellow and by accident part of it stuck to some school work, leaving then impression of writing, but i decided i liked the effect and applied words to the rest of the swirl.
