some small stuff, but overall a VERY good job translating!
the original pattern says about 150 grams (82 yds x3) of yarn, crochet needle 2, 45 cm long
I used about 200 grams of yarn (82yds x 4) needle 3.5 and mine turned out 60 cm
Row 68 on the body should be:
Row 68: 2sc in ea sc, (30) finish with 1 sl st in first st, cut yarn
and the legs:
Start with color one, changing color every third row in the following order: 2, 3, 4, 1
Row 1: Magic Loop with 8sc
Row 2: 2 sc in ea sc (12)
Row 3: 2 sc in every 3rd sc (16)
Row 4: 1 sc in ea sc
And the Eye is in black, not the tail
Crochet in black
Ch 4, form a ring with sl st in 1st st.
Row 1: 8sc
Row 2: 2sc in every 2nd sc, finish with sl st in next st.