one2stitcharoo : your site looks great! you must've put a lot of time into preparing to open since you haven't been open very long. Your products are adorable too!
There are a few photos where the fabric in the background has a crease, I would try to iron and retake pics or photoshop them out. For example the porcu-pining first picture.
I LOVE the 'its a magnet' picture with the colored letters. You should think about doing the fifth picture maybe just with a ruler next to them or something.
Overall your pictures are great but look at the edges of some of them, the fabric background ends in some corners and you can see the table or whatever they were on. For example the every week is like shark week. Your items looks great and it even looks good as a thumbnail but be sure to look at the parts of the picture that aren't the focus also.
The mini ones, though they are listed in their own category, when you look at all the items on your page, they don't look any different. Maybe add mini to the title?
I was wondering how big the magnets inside were. I don't know how you could tell us that, but that was a question I immediately had.
I also think your last sentence "If you have any questions, feel free to convo me by clicking the blue "Contact" button on the right side of the page." is kind of needless because etsy automatically puts a link to contact you at the end of your listing. look at them in customer view and you'll see what I mean.
I don't know how much traffic you've been getting but one thing to think about is that google uses the beginning of your description on their results. You can see it when you edit or list an item. You might want to just think about reordering your descriptions such as the cow hanging onto the moon, I like quoting the song, but that's not going to get a click from google.
Overall, amazing job, I nitpicked a bit to give you something but I wish my shop looked as good as yours!
I hope this helps and good luck!
I would love some critique on my shop, http://www.etsy.com/shop/thegreengriffin?ref=si_shop