I found the same pattern and bookmarked it yesterday. I think he looks great! But I do see how he could look a little angry. I agree with everyone else, maybe just move the eyes and nose up a little. He is cute and you did a great job!!!
I made this giant cupcake (approx. 2 feet tall) for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day. I decorated it with little heart "sprinkles" and wrote "I Love You!" on the "chocolate" part. It was a lot of fun to make.